Sunday, December 14, 2008

I'll Wait For You Comments

Rating: 4.8

If I search for you
I hope you'll search for me
if I don't search
then I'll wait
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Allen Steble The Philosophical Poet
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~*~Secretive Shelby~*~ 04 April 2009

It's as if you took a short story and put it into poetic words. It's impressive and not very many people can do that. You should be proud. This poem ver well worth the read. It's different, lovely, unique, and worth remembering. Nice peice Scale 1-10...12

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Dean ....... 07 January 2009

i like this type of poem, mainly because it tells a mini story, doesn't drift

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 31 December 2008

a milky poem, so naive.

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Wonderful poem..... Very lovely and sweet... Great piece Krista

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Fiona Davidson 14 December 2008

Beautiful heartfelt words Allen...thank you

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