i wanna hold you in my arms, and i never want to let you go,
you were my life, you were my dreams, you were so much to me,
i wanna hold you tight and never let go,
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great song i love it and it has a great meaning and i can tell your a very talented writer great job
i loved it, it had so much heart in it. and thats really amazing.
This is really cute... the girl you wrote this about is one lucky LUCKY girl! ! ! ! i'm jelious! ! ! ! ! lol jk ttyl
Aden, Another great song/poem. and again i conect with it. But anyway i would like to mak one suggestion and i am not saying youhave tochange it because i still really like the song the way it is but it might make it kinda cool if t the nd in the last stanza instead of 'wer' you could say it like: 'You are my life, you are my dreams, you are my everthing'. Just in the last stanza cause it sorta adds to the idea of how much you still careabout the person who you are refering too. But still great song I liked it.
Dear Aden, This one was my favorite. You are new to writing poems just like me. Keep it up and I will look for more from you.
I have an ever open heart for you, I am everready to wipe your dew, I shall never ever say you 'adieu', Once again love each other anew.
'i wanna hold you in my arms, and i never want to let you go, you were my life, you were my dreams, .........' - ADEN WILKES THAT LINE JUST REALLY MAKES ME WANT TO CRY.. I REALLY LOVE YOUR SONG... HOPEFULLY SOME DAY I WILL HEAR YOU SING IT...
Aden a great heartache piece I remember when I was 15 had my heart broken the same way don't give up you know the perfect one for you is out there and don't ever stop writing you're very talented my young friend
awesome way of expressing yourself...i've been yearning to hold someone and to never let him go..but sometimes it'll be better to just let go especially if that someone does'nt love you the way you do..hmm..easier said than done..but i wish you all the best...keep up the good work...
I like this and I can definitely relate. I hope you get this put to a melody. If you do I'd like to hear. it. <333
You did amazing job with this song. Its very heart felt, well down. :)
This a wonderful heartfelt lyrics that speaks so much truth and honesty, Well done and keep the good work as your works are very good quality, Take care, mel xxx
awww...that's soo good....if you had a tune to it i would download it...is that on a personal experience? the emotions of the writer is so depressing, it makes me want to give the speaker a hug!
AWESOME! ! ! I seriously so love your work :)