Monday, December 9, 2013

Ill Comments

Rating: 5.0

There's a fire inside of me,
Crying out for the knife,
Others and me die helplessly,
Living off, veins running with strife.
...
Read full text

Thomas Ware
COMMENTS
Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 09 December 2013

Life is about living, not of gun and slaying, the fire has to be flaming, the mind has to calm down, the pleasure out of hate, not sustainable, but a waste... I read a few of your poems and these poems are filled with gun, weapons, despair and the truth, you like to bring out from the harsh world..Keep writing, but avoid extreme violence..Thank you for sharing...

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success