Il Mio Eterno [πΌπ π΄ππ΄ππ½π°π»πππ¦] Poem by Miracle Oguine
Il Mio Eterno [πΌπ π΄ππ΄ππ½π°π»πππ¦]
For a few years now, what I have been feeling all my life has been sadness, depression and loneliness.
But today i feel different,
The sudden happiness,
This limitless confidence and joy,
This long lasting smile,
It is days like this I truly treasure,
Excellent morning and a beautiful weather.
I look up to the sky and all I could picture out was
her stare, which sends Shudder through me,
Her sparkling brown eyes.
She enslaves me with her smile,
She was my cure,
The only medication I needed.
O taste and see that the Lord is good,
Who today has delivered me by sending
Her into my life.
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'I look [ I'd use 'looked' ] up to the sky and all I could picture out [ why do you use 'out' here? ] was her stare, which sends shutters [ 'shutters' are on some windows; you mean 'shudders', I hope. ] through me, '
(cont.) ..'For a few years now my life has been sadness, depression and loneliness.'
Welcome, 'New Poet', to PH. Your first line I would edit to read as follows: 'What I have been feeling all my life has been sadness, depression and loneliness.' OR like this: (cont.) ..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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7/23/2025 12:09:26 PM # 1.0.0
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