Iife Is For The Birds Comments
Life is for the birds
I feel like I'm slowly being torn apart
Like a flock of vultures are fighting over my flesh
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Hi poet-friend! I am sure many have had the same type of experience, very well and vividly written! Get some rest, LOL! Loyd
One more thing—read women poets like my friends Linda Pasten, Denise Levertov, Mary Oppen, poet and Modern painter. Best, Dennis
I like this poem too, the metaphor of birds, vultures, crows picking at you. I feel the same way about crows though I love the Canadian geese that live here in North Carolina. Keep on writing poems!
Thank you so much for your comments I'm glad that you liked my poem I was definitely going through some things when I wrote this one that's for sure LOL and I'll definitely check out those writers as well thank you for
You have to turn the tumbler with precision............very nice words.
Thank you for your inciteful comment for sure. Im so happy you lile my poetry i have read quite a few of your poems as well and they are terrific
Thank you so much for enjoying my poem. Have a blessed day for sure.
Beautiful, metaphoric. The metaphors of different birds, vultures to start with, and then crows…that bring "only darkness" are exquisite. Truly gelling with each other and with the mood of the poem. Loved it.
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7/20/2025 11:23:57 PM # 1.0.0
Touching and grueling