Thursday, October 29, 2020

Ignoring And Boring Comments

Rating: 4.5

A vacuum when one was ignoring me,
Thanks, when again one is souring me,
He with bottle of vinegar,
Me with a spoon of sugar,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 31 October 2020

What a combination, Akhtar Sahab! A bottle of vinegar with a spoon of sugar! Never tasted it, so i do not know it. But, as you have pointed out in a subtle way, it could be be sour or tangy. So it's best ignored....... :) Surely,5 Stars

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Khairul Ahsan 30 October 2020

'He with bottle of vinegar, Me with a spoon of sugar, Mixture of the two isn't boring me.' - That's good!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 October 2020

Clever thoughts wonderfully versified. Sugar will always tame any kind of taste. Witty and well conveyed write.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 October 2020

A well authored poem. Truly fantastic and poetic...5 stars*****

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T Rajan Evol 29 October 2020

Short poem expressing inner pains.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 October 2020

A wonderful write sir! Thanks for sharing...Top score

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