Sunday, June 12, 2011

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Rating: 3.8

why is it that i am the one to sacrifice
why cant you.
why is it that when i get hurt
you don't seem to notice
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zainab zaheen
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Luz Hanaii 31 August 2011

This poem also shows much pain in unreciprocated love. Time for a new love.

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Allemagne Roßmann 17 August 2011

Questions unanswered.Happens when one feels so.Good poetry once again here.

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Abhimanyu Kumar.s 12 June 2011

true emotions displayed. nicely constructed poem. good keep it up

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 12 June 2011

Fantastic poem. Full of depth and wisdom. The poem is rich in imagery. Great write indeed. I give it 10/10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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