why is it that i am the one to sacrifice
why cant you.
why is it that when i get hurt
you don't seem to notice
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Questions unanswered.Happens when one feels so.Good poetry once again here.
true emotions displayed. nicely constructed poem. good keep it up
Fantastic poem. Full of depth and wisdom. The poem is rich in imagery. Great write indeed. I give it 10/10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.
This poem also shows much pain in unreciprocated love. Time for a new love.