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The content of feeling contained in this is very honest and I could feel real emotion here, A powerful write, Love duncan

What an incredible poem. this really struck a chord, Mary. Keep 'em coming. Respect, JB

Definitely on a roll, Mary. Liked this as well. This style becomes you H

Life can be very dramatic for the young.

It's the 'piggy in the middle' saga. Which side do you lean towards, it's hard to know which way to go, it's a no win situation. When your a child these things are very haunting, and you tread so softly around the combatants. Well told. Love Ernestine XXX

went through quite the same thing.

a wonderful narrative subtle compelling complete the history of the inner heart of a family where love is needed but at moments another matter intrudes and the little girl dreams of happiness and in the end attains happiness even though the tears have momentarily stained the pillow a fine poem