Friday, February 24, 2006
Ignorant Comments
Rating: ★3.5
endless walking
where my mind is calm
and hungry.
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Kath Moore
05 November 2007
4. This could work if it was approached through details and imagery. All I know about this city is that it has buildings and sun. That isn't enough. Be specific. Describe. Convey the experience.
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9/10/2025 5:08:26 PM # 1.0.0
It's good but I think it needs just a little work with the words, as I do get what you are saying but a little more polish please.