Saturday, February 27, 2010

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Oh, God bless me
Oh, here they come.

I thought they loved me
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sam naser
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Ellery Lim 27 February 2010

short but effective to a certain extent i guess, it keeps readers guessing the end progress. but it never tells a tale, but promotes a feeling of death and fear. also if you are free, please comment and critique my poems thank you

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Zack Burton 27 February 2010

Short but effective. Made me laugh. Nice

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