Tuesday, August 9, 2011

Ignorant Comments

Rating: 5.0

I'll admit I'm purposely ignorant,
Refusing to learn how to cope with,
The idea I'm no longer your love game participant.
Seducing my mind like I'm that yo-yo on the line,
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Thomas F. Spencer 10 August 2011

Ha, I usually only write when I'm really worked up, so that one slipped, but IDK what you talking about: ] Nd thanks, I usually write with some sort of music in the background, more because I just don't like silence, but it helps with my 'flow' nonetheless. aha

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Leslie Ching 09 August 2011

Nice write...again your own voice shines through in this poem, and I like how the natural rhythm makes it seem almost like the lyrics to a song. I think you may have made a mistake in the second line, however; perhaps you meant 'cope' instead of 'coup'? : P -LC-

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