Sunday, May 5, 2013

Ignorance Comments

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In the begging we were ignorant
We lived a life of bliss
We did not know life's sorrow and woe
Yet we were unknowingly on the path to loneliness
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Musical Notes 05 May 2013

you always give, more than you get.......! ! vey well said...! indeed a very thought provoking and rhyming also good..! !

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 05 May 2013

nice poem Marissa concluding line contains the universal truth but ignorantly we forget thank u

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