Sojourn, efficacy entrapped within the boundaries
Choreographing the dances of life, like calligraphies
The strokes, beckoned a second look
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I enjoy your writing. It is about common enough subjects that others can identify with them, but using unique types of images or thoughts. Very nice.
That is amazing, i like this poem keep writing I love your poems :)
That's really nice Mr. Yusof. I enjoy reading this poem.
It's kinda like this - if you got right down to it, isn't that always the way? Shoulda, woulda, coulda. It's about about our impending blind date with human selectivity of life in general. I like the open ended modifier of your perspective premise. Though in this instance, gruesome, unfolding horror have always played a big part in the most vulnerable amoungst us in terms of ignorance.
Your poem portrays a lot of movement and encourages an appreciation of our movements. I wish I were acquainted with the music to better appreciate your words and thoughts. Keep on writing. Peace is a worthy cause and, hopefully, we can find it in every home.
great choice of words.... with depth... thoughts provoking piece...
I enjoyed your choice of words on this one, Sulaiman! These stanzas dance with life and circumstance, a strong portrait of a mind at work on the deep notions of existence. Great job on this one! Warm regards, John
Sulai, this is a lovely poem. I love the part that says 'Who, constituted for the loss? Leave it to God at all costs? '
an excellent piece i must appreciate. if everyone starts thinking like you brother, this world will become a perfect place. thanks for sharing.
it's a nice poem. peace is something we all want, but i dunno if we'll ever get it though...
ignorance's cold, as the winter's worst night, if we could take a detour, we would see the reason we fight.. Definitely a great poem..
Khuda Hafeez! Sulaiman that was beautiful! A rose by any other name would smell just as sweet!