Monday, February 2, 2009

*** Ignorance *** Comments

Rating: 4.7

Sojourn, efficacy entrapped within the boundaries
Choreographing the dances of life, like calligraphies

The strokes, beckoned a second look
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
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Exasperation 22 December 2019

Khuda Hafeez! Sulaiman that was beautiful! A rose by any other name would smell just as sweet!

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April Kiessling 07 July 2009

I enjoy your writing. It is about common enough subjects that others can identify with them, but using unique types of images or thoughts. Very nice.

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Lucero Flores 16 June 2009

That is amazing, i like this poem keep writing I love your poems :)

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Dolan Doran 06 March 2009

amazing. so perfectly true. awsome.

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Riquetta Elliott 13 February 2009

That's really nice Mr. Yusof. I enjoy reading this poem.

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Brett Ackerman 10 February 2009

It's kinda like this - if you got right down to it, isn't that always the way? Shoulda, woulda, coulda. It's about about our impending blind date with human selectivity of life in general. I like the open ended modifier of your perspective premise. Though in this instance, gruesome, unfolding horror have always played a big part in the most vulnerable amoungst us in terms of ignorance.

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Kerrial Newham 09 February 2009

Great poem, good word choices and overall a fair poem.

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Ben Gieske 09 February 2009

Your poem portrays a lot of movement and encourages an appreciation of our movements. I wish I were acquainted with the music to better appreciate your words and thoughts. Keep on writing. Peace is a worthy cause and, hopefully, we can find it in every home.

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Miriam Maia Padua 09 February 2009

great choice of words.... with depth... thoughts provoking piece...

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John Weber 08 February 2009

I enjoyed your choice of words on this one, Sulaiman! These stanzas dance with life and circumstance, a strong portrait of a mind at work on the deep notions of existence. Great job on this one! Warm regards, John

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Gargi Saha 08 February 2009

A wonderful write. U get 10++......... Love & hugs.

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John Smith 07 February 2009

Your poetry is always so beautiful, it's a ray of light.

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Denvor Fernandez 07 February 2009

Yes, we allshare the same interest. Very poetic

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Ken Suh 06 February 2009

This is an excellent peom :) lovely play on words :) 10+

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Sylvia Squire 06 February 2009

Sulai, this is a lovely poem. I love the part that says 'Who, constituted for the loss? Leave it to God at all costs? '

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Jessica Waskelis 06 February 2009

dude thats GOOD! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Monyrath Prak 06 February 2009

niczzzzz i like it =]

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Seema Chowdhury 05 February 2009

an excellent piece i must appreciate. if everyone starts thinking like you brother, this world will become a perfect place. thanks for sharing.

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Angelica Dela Cruz 05 February 2009

it's a nice poem. peace is something we all want, but i dunno if we'll ever get it though...

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Mamor Adi P 04 February 2009

ignorance's cold, as the winter's worst night, if we could take a detour, we would see the reason we fight.. Definitely a great poem..

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