If You're Not On Board (Villanelle) Comments

Ah, as you said, you are a seasoned seafarer as well as a poet. Wonder what you would think about - The Captain's Secret - Adeline

What a well-wrought and intriguing piece. I love the bit of explanation also. I need to learn to do that (should I ever turn out such an exemplary piece myself) . Great work all around. (Guess I am slightly in love with nautical terms and stuff like that) .