Thursday, June 12, 2008

If You Would, Please Comments

Rating: 5.0

Pass the salt dear, if you would, please,
I need to put some on these peas.
But not the pepper, now don’t tease,
you know it always makes me sneeze.
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Ernestine Northover
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* Sunprincess * 28 May 2016

..........most wonderful, I enjoyed this :) ★

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Stone Granite 16 June 2008

Your talents are expansive. A very fun poem to read, I did so several times.

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Oh brilliant! Perfectly formed, E. t x

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David Harris 12 June 2008

Ernestine, this made me hungry, but it also tickled my sense of humour. Loved it my friend. Top marks and thanks for sharing it. Hugs David

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Raynette Eitel 12 June 2008

Ernestine, this is what I call a 'comfy, cozy poem.' Very nice, very warm, rhymes neat and tidy. Good work. Raynete

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Duncan Wyllie 12 June 2008

The horseradish sauce, is so nice, I love the stuff, always pleased when it comes with the roast meal Great bit of fun here Ernestine Just what this site needs at the moment Love duncan X

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