If You Would Only Comments
If you would only call me once,
And write a letter too;
It might just end the pain I feel
That comes from loving you.
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Stirring in the embers, fanning flames - meanwhile feeling like a wave-tossed ship with sails torn.... how many can relate to that....full of heartfelt emotion..well written indeed - Cindy
how tender how sweet...........that is all it takes to feel special and cherished that is all...........well penned
Aww this is so beautifully romantic. Creatively expressed. Touching. Every time i read one of your poems i'm reminded why i am such a fan. :) Thank you so very much for sharing.
Very beautiful Sir! In this balladic structure(which I often employ) you could so well express those tender, lovely feelings; they have the full strength to make instant impressions on readers' hearts. Thanks for this experience.
if only she knew that you don't ask much...that a little is a lot....a little is more than enough....
VERY beautiful.. GOd, this made me cry, just cuz of the beauty of this, and the striking emotion it gives me. i just got out of the most important relationship, lost the most valuable and loving guy of my life...and this hits me so hard in the chest, because ur right.. 'if only' these things happen... it would help the pain we feel, and experience. i dont know, maybe for me, it was a mistake to tell somebody that you love them.. ='(
a lovely poem the rhyme and love in that poem really blend beautifully...10
hey bro.. it's as if this was written for me.. thanks for the read.. I have been thinking those same thoughts recently for the one young lady
you are incredible Greenwolfe...Your poetry is absolutely amazing......I enjoy each and every one of your poems..Please keep writing, there are not so many people with your prolific talent..Cheers
This poem reminds me of every thing I should have done...thank you...
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OMG, this is my absolute favorites piece. I love the flow and the delicate nature of your words. This is stupendous. So beautiful and touching... Oh goodness, sighs...