Saturday, March 21, 2009

If You Would Love Me Comments

Rating: 4.5

“Where is the love? ” you asked, but I
could find only splinters and broken shards
lying desultory in dusty corners
of old and empty rooms,
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Rory Hudson
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Julie Dant 30 March 2009

This one is very interesting to me and also has some beautiful imagery such as the lines 'could find only splinters and broken shards lying desultory in dusty corners of old and empty rooms, ', I also really liked the second stanza..with that last line about trying to dance again and again. We all deserve to have the oportunity to dance through life without having to go through so much pain, but it seldom, if ever, can happen that way, can it?

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