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every line, every word, every a stanza contains so much strings attached. well penned, a very lovely poem!

..............................................excellent!

Very true I must take that chance

This could serve as a great intro to and metaphor for your poetry. Simple words and sentiment, with strong, immediate, & (dare i say?) persuasive imagery. Nice work.

I like this, its very true for you. You have an amazing habit of changing the people around you (always for the better) ... its good u know this Xx