Thursday, October 11, 2007

If You Were With Me Comments

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If you were here with me
Would act as more than friends
Would we lie apon my roof
Would we just look at the stars
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Charlsy Soccer Chick
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Roy Gotaas 15 June 2008

It asks so many of the right questions, Charlsy. You seem to have a knack for cutting to the heart of things.

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Arundhati Sinha 11 October 2007

very matured poem for someone your age... really nice. keep writing.

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