Friday, November 9, 2007

If You Were The Sky Comments

Rating: 5.0

If you were the sky
Then you would be blue,
No clouds passing by
A wonderful view,
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Beautiful and wistful poem... you never cease to astonish me and never cease to surprise me with your beautiful verse..

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Deborah Cromer 03 August 2009

Outstanding. What a way with the words you certainly have. Very nice. Very, very, very nice. DC

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Duncan Wyllie 11 March 2008

Wonderful words..if you were a poem I'd read every line, and ponder the star whose radiance did shine.... Love duncan X

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Ernestine Northover 10 March 2008

You fuse the hues. Such a charming write. Colours contrasting with love. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Jeannie Ann Clark 27 December 2007

How refreshing it would be; if everyone had eyes like these! Another beautiful expression....Thank you, again.

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Jemarie Ragudo 11 November 2007

Such a beautiful comparison can only be worded by someone who's passionate with life and poetry. Great work!

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Linda Weischedel 09 November 2007

Beautiful poem Andrew! It is very touching. Gonna give you a 10 on this one. Always, Linda

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