If you were the sky
Then you would be blue,
No clouds passing by
A wonderful view,
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Outstanding. What a way with the words you certainly have. Very nice. Very, very, very nice. DC
Wonderful words..if you were a poem I'd read every line, and ponder the star whose radiance did shine.... Love duncan X
You fuse the hues. Such a charming write. Colours contrasting with love. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
How refreshing it would be; if everyone had eyes like these! Another beautiful expression....Thank you, again.
Such a beautiful comparison can only be worded by someone who's passionate with life and poetry. Great work!
Beautiful poem Andrew! It is very touching. Gonna give you a 10 on this one. Always, Linda
Beautiful and wistful poem... you never cease to astonish me and never cease to surprise me with your beautiful verse..