Sunday, July 22, 2012

If You Were The Breeze! Comments

Rating: 5.0

I see the light approaching,
The earth is rumbling
And the wind is too strong...
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Romeo Della Valle
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Allemagne Roßmann 31 July 2012

Hall of fame -E il vento è troppo forte...La brezza--magnanimous write again

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Jenna Chryste 25 July 2012

Wonderful poem. Can't find words to describe how I feel about the first stanza... it's just beautiful ;) ~Jenna [333

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Cool breeze...touching poem

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Valerie Dohren 22 July 2012

Beautiful Romeo, love the closing stanza which is so captivating and full of imagination. Definitely a 10! !

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Romeo Della Valle

Romeo Della Valle

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