If You Were Like A Garden Comments

And when they harshly clipped at you until you finally fell apart I’d want to find the pieces and show you who you are I’d want to dive down deeper Into the cold dark sea And rid you of those shipwrecks and meaningless debris If you blend in with the cynical crowd Or stand out and have a voice I won’t take you by force what a wonderful imagination and at the end of the stanzas you come as a person love and save. very nice expressions of love. thank you dear poetess. tony

nice poem.thank you.

wow! its ammmmmmazing! finely penned! 10+

i agree, very interesting idea 10

A unique idea of chosing a topic out of several themetics of describing the feelings of love for the adored one in context of the peculiarities of the Nature. The title is very beautiful and tells all that what you actually desire for your loved one to be like.....10/10