Saturday, January 12, 2008

**if You Were Different Comments

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Would it be logical to invite your foot into my lodging for your understanding
Would you spare a thought to the voice with no place to call home
Does it chill your nerves to be present with one living a crushed dream
Or will you not care, not notice ‘cause 'tis not your image
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Sylvi Sylva
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 27 January 2008

Well done Sis. We're all from the same species, Homo Sapiens.Our bloods are red. You sent a clear message to them that we are what we are. Keep it up, pal.

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Rani Turton 21 January 2008

This is an immense and touching piece of work. Thank you.

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Sheila Jones 20 January 2008

I LOVE this poem, Sylvi! You are gifted.

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Broken Peaces 12 January 2008

Just think if you were different Sylvi I might not be reading your lovely work, don't change you are alive in your work and are loved for it.10 Chris

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