Sunday, November 8, 2009
If You Were Comments
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If you were the sea
I shall be the eternal shore
Where you shall come often
To caress with amorous lips
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Indira Babbellapati
08 November 2009
only the third stanza reads somewhat out of place n prosaic...mmm, what if street is replaced by 'boulvard? '
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7/28/2025 2:32:44 AM # 1.0.0
from the world of IFs written so fabulously...........great one! ! !