If You Want To Preach A Sermon Go To Church Comments

If You Want To Preach A Sermon Go To Church Bibles are every where now those whom read them do the rest do not. Those whom go to church need the church they say to do what's right. If you need to preach then go to church and leave the rest of U.S. with all our doubts. =========================================== hiya iip, I see you have stepped up into the PH pulpit! :) I’m glad you punctuated so I could link the lines into sentences. otherwise I may have not linked line 5 with line 6. I love this. to MyPoemList! ============================================== Bri’s FORM FOR COMMENTING ON POEMS: [“n/a” = not applicable to this poem] ==================================== Poem Comment Form As my shoulder I did abuse, here is what may amuse: A poem-comment “form”; I know it ain’t the norm. But if I write comments TOO long, I’ll never hear the end of the song: “Bri, I Told You, Take Care Of Shoulder; You’re Young No More & Getting Older”. So this simple form I have devised. Don’t look at me! Are you so surprised? If I use the form I MAY have more time … to read more poems with, or without, rhyme. After all, I can’t read and NOT comment, and if you must have MORE input ……….from me … send me a request ……….., though “more” AIN’T free. ======================================== A. I enjoyed it: Yes _xx__ ; No___ ; I’m not telling___ B. I understood it: Yes_x__; No___; I’m not sure___ C. I enjoyed the: Rhyming ___; Rhythm_x__; Originality_x__; Cleverness___; Humor/Humour___; Seriousness_x__; Sensuality___; Humanity_x__; Alliterations___; Personal touch___; Other __________ D. It makes me want to read more of your poems: Yes_x__; No___; I’m not telling___ E. The use of English was: Impeccable/good___; Deplorable/bad___; In between_x__; No comment___ F. Could use proofreading: Yes___; No___; You decide__x_ THANKS FOR SHARING. bri :)