If You Want— Then Go Comments

WHAT IF, AFTER READING THIS MOVING PIECE, IT DECIDES NOT TO GO! AND LIKE A BUTTERFLY, - TRIES TO SIT ON THE BARRICADE'S DOOR? ! 10! -Raj Nandy

a beautiful sweet writing..loved it

hmm...i think that one doesn't really wanted to go...maybe just waiting for the butterfly's heart to soften a little. enjoyable read! : -)

wow what a wonderful creation! ! ! ! i can picture in my mind the brilliant images you have here...thanks best regards, jdh

''Purplish breeze touching azure sky Aroma of fine arts walking Flowers blooming from ring tone'' This double visual metaphor, that consists of tangibility between visual and sonorous fields suggests the feelings that are generated by waiting a call.''Flowers blooming'' means the renaissance of the feelings.10

If you want-then go..... what a heart felt composition! You express your love by askink your beloved to GO! !

Ahhh Love sweet Love, when it's gone one can only let go and hope....again great write

What is is what is, what will be will be nice work

A good poem to live, giving freedom to a person is very hard, yet, sometimes we have to accept that if we love someone..we set him free.

where to go sitting no as barricades........ you have catchy write yet we may not go away crossing the barricades........ beautifully penned from other angle.......

So surreally real. The concepts are eyecatching and the images continue to linger longingly. love Dónall Dónall

A beautiful piece with much frankness and being oneself perfectly..Winnie

nice piece, to the point, thaks for sharing

A don't mind attitude...as implied....

leaving some one on his or her behalf is a good way of treatment

Losing your patience in a crazy childish mind of a friend/someone special i suppose....Nice write with a touch of ego! 10/10

hmn...letting go is the hardest thing to do especially you really love the person.

Wow...That's the spirit.I should have read it before I mailed you.....oho...I liked it...10++...Always for you from Brishti

If you want— then go I am not sitting on roads Like barricades , , , let everybody go if they want... beautiful write and deservees the attention...10 read mine si may go and butterflies around.. if not then mary to marry

flower's blooming from ring tones.....a very different write