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thx for ur comment.....i like this one alot....the way u write its cool...i like it lol

'But if it is my heart you truly want Just tell me it my dear, So I won't be wandering to and fro, While you are standing here'... beautiful concluding lines, Ashley...you tell it straight but in a nice way...soft and humorous tone...nice rhyming too...good piece...10

i must give props for 2 things especially, the sarcasm...a warning sign would be nice..and the rhyme scheme, very well penned u got game word

awwwwww so true check out some of my poems! ! ! ! !

Excellent simply excellent moving and heartfelt, well written wonderful flow of words. an easy 10 from me. keep writing.

ashley! i must say' with your heart i will not play' if you promise that you will stay.this poem has gone all the way. another ten you could go to my page and read to your hearts desire.

A wonderful piece. hammering.10 you may read any of my poem at random. I hope Cleopatra's glory and Helen of Troy will be educative. others are mostly four lined.