Monday, January 2, 2006

If You Take Care Of Them, New Shoes Can Last A Long Time Comments

Rating: 5.0

My father brought me a pair of brown wingtip shoes
for my first day of junior high school
and since it was one of the first times I had
shoes that cost more then $1.99
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Oscar Mireles
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Joseph Daly 02 January 2006

Great, flowing peice Oscar. I like the title but I liked the way that you portray deciete as something of a neseccery evil. there is a glowing feeling to this work; a touch of childlike innocence.

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