Saturday, April 9, 2016

If You Take Away My Breath Comments

Rating: 4.7

If you take away my breath
I will fall down and perish.
My body shall return to dust.
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Dr. Antony Theodore
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Thabani Khumalo 28 January 2019

Still, I'm curious to know, sir, when it is when to come to view the world in this way. For I do try to get a grasp, but your gift can only befit and I can only aspire to be. Teach me the great secret to writing.

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Juliana Jones 24 November 2018

I found myself swooning to the rhythm of dance. Well done.

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Susheela Shiju 09 November 2018

beautifully penned dear Tony! 10++

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Baquee Billah Ahmed 01 September 2018

nice...............................................................

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Sharron Stephenson 07 July 2018

i understand the words

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Zakir Hussain Haidary 09 December 2016

INDEED HE IS ALWAYS THERE

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Rajnish Manga 05 June 2016

You alone can renew the face of the earth....God..is..great.

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salva sally 02 June 2016

Very deep and mythical poem Tony! ! ! Thank you dear Poet.. what to say..

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Untamed Heart 24 April 2016

God's love endures for ever. I hope that my faith would not falter.

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V.m.saraswathy Munuswamy 15 April 2016

Fantastic, refreshing, rejunuating picture perfect good poem, rhythmic dear 10

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Ejay 1806 12 April 2016

A very powerful piece of poetry. 👍👍👍

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Mirjana Miric Inalman 12 April 2016

I love the empowerment and affirmation the poem provokes in the reader, nicely done!

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Tom Billsborough 09 April 2016

Lovely way to welcome Spring, Tony. The rhythm is mastery and the photo is great too. Tom Billsborough

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Tom Billsborough 09 April 2016

A lovely way to introduce Spring, Tony.. Magnificent sense of rhythm. Tom Billsborough

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