If you take away my breath
I will fall down and perish.
My body shall return to dust.
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Very deep and mythical poem Tony! ! ! Thank you dear Poet.. what to say..
God's love endures for ever. I hope that my faith would not falter.
Fantastic, refreshing, rejunuating picture perfect good poem, rhythmic dear 10
I love the empowerment and affirmation the poem provokes in the reader, nicely done!
Lovely way to welcome Spring, Tony. The rhythm is mastery and the photo is great too. Tom Billsborough
A lovely way to introduce Spring, Tony.. Magnificent sense of rhythm. Tom Billsborough
Still, I'm curious to know, sir, when it is when to come to view the world in this way. For I do try to get a grasp, but your gift can only befit and I can only aspire to be. Teach me the great secret to writing.