A flower will bloom
In my small garden
On my plant too one day
And I shall offer
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The flower blended with scent of love (connecting to your next poem) cant be rejected but would be accepted smilingly.......i hope you succeed in this Sir.......a good write
I agree with Kanav's comment, that makes me envious of your garden who has beautiful flowers. Valsa's comments too I am adding it..Who will deny a flower of such exquisite beauty and fragrance! Don't worry, there would be many takers for it! So it won't go wasted! ! Valarie's comments too looks beautiful.. A beautiful flower of a poem - who could refuse such a flower.... Sir I am just confused what I should comment especially after seeing all these lovely comments. So I am too putting a stamp on it....Beautiful poem. Loved reading it.
Who will deny a flower of such exquisite beauty and fragrance! Don't worry, there would be many takers for it! So it won't go wasted! !
that makes me envious of your garden, , , , though i did not get the flower, , , and of your writing skills too: P
A beautiful flower of a poem - who could refuse such a flower.
Compelling and creative!