Monday, April 30, 2012

If You'Re Sweet Comments

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If you're sweet, you earn contempt,
And if you're sour, hatred;
The sum of the attentions force
By kindness, unabated.
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Patti Masterman
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Johnathan Juarez 12 May 2012

sorry but i like it lol just kidding. great understanding it makes me remember all of the times i've been vulnerable. i like its contradicting essence as well.

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Smoky Hoss 05 May 2012

A real poem written by a real poet; and correct you are, real humans are indeed too few.

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Captain Cur 05 May 2012

Does this go for pirates? I will stop worrying what my victims think of me. Great writing, to the point.

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Neela Nath Das 01 May 2012

Really_____Real humans are too few.I feel your poem as a sermon.Nice!

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Valerie Dohren 30 April 2012

'To thine own self be true' philosophy expressed here. Very good work.

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