Sunday, July 13, 2008
If You’re Gone Comments
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If you don’t love me
I can’t stay here
If you don’t love me
I’ll love you still, dear
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Shy Powder
13 July 2008
If you're gone, my love will be like a fork without its prongs (ha-ha) !
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~*~(\ /) ~*~Payyton: DrowningSorrow~*~(\ /) ~*~
13 July 2008
I think that it's perfect the way that it is, but if you added to it, it would be even better. You really good, keep it up! Payton <3
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7/20/2025 8:44:44 PM # 1.0.0
Wow... Well if you wanted to add you could say something like 'I look into your eyes. And my heart starts to melt. Being with you is the best I've ever felt. But if you leave. And say goodbye. Then I'll die painfully from the inside...' It's just an idea but I agree with Payton. Your poem is perfect. Luv Rissa xo