Monday, June 22, 2009

If You Promise To Be By My Side! Comments

Rating: 4.0

when the neon lights will fade,

when I would be left tired and jade!
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Ravi Singh
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Vanita Thakkar 25 July 2009

Love is subtle and strong at the same time. This is a poem depicting the strength of love. So realistic, so mundane and yet so divine a feeling. Keep it up. Vanita.

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Marieta Maglas 01 July 2009

poetically subtle message..nice

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