If You Only Knew.. (Edited Version By: Peter Mamara) Comments

Full of love and emotions. Written with all of the love and passions that shoots arrows to the heart. Conflicting emotions really tears at the heart strings. Will take some time to mend. Stay positive.

full of emotion, full of the words that shake the hearts of lover Very nice.

That my heart is in love with your heart and with your soul, ... lovely feelings.. nice poem...10

Lovely poem, speaks from the heart....well done

An excellent poem that touches the heart! My two cents on this: If only the lovers knew.... What one's indifference Causes to the other, There would be so less tears to fall! So less pain, so less heartbreak, And the world would be with so much love, Comfort and congeniality!

wow lovely write .so romantic: -)