Friday, April 25, 2008

If You Must Know Comments

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If you must know...

I'm the meadow.
I'm the stream through the hills.
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Anita Atina 26 April 2008

Lawrence this is a special poem, you've touched the truth of life, beautifully.

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John Thorkild Ellison 25 April 2008

I think this has got a certain something! Very intriguing and nicely expressed.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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