Thursday, June 6, 2019

If You Love Me Comments

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If You Love

If you love and make love a joy,
Love with mind free from mind,
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Prabir Gayen
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 June 2019

The two closure lines capture an eternal love. " If you love make your body my abode Make my body your resting place" . Beautiful lines from a marvelous piece of poetry.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 June 2019

A wonderful poem of love that holds us spellbound. A great write that captures the very essence of love. If we put aside our mind and let love flows, probably the tie that binds spouses will never be severed.

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Srijita Mondal 07 June 2019

❤️....Let us forget our small identity, Come and sit inside my being....❤️

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Julia Luber 06 June 2019

I could rewrite all of these lines just to reeperience them with undivided attention. Resonant sense of Oneness as love with one's lover- intimate and sensual! Let us kiss and become kissing! Float with naked body without mind.

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