Tuesday, September 27, 2011

If You Love Me Comments

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If I am your one and only
then why is she in your arms?
If you love me
then why did you leave me?
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Jinal Oswal 18 November 2011

It's so difficult, life becomes miserable at this point of time.. You have expressed right words.. Short and to the point.. Lovely write...

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Zoe Forsyth 15 November 2011

I Like It. It Reminds Me Of Some People I Know...

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Stefanie Fontker 30 September 2011

Sometimes those that have hurt us are willing to offer anything but the truth. Interesting piece, I enjoy your poetry.

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Abraham Bravo 27 September 2011

Wow.. That hit me. Exquisite piece of art.

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