If You Lift Yourself Up To Me. Comments

Beautiful poem penned with your soft words. the last verses are full of senseity of love ...10+

O, unseen God! worshiping you in my secret temple I offer you the incense of love before your golden shrine.......loved these lines. A beautiful poem beautifully delineated on God. Thanks for sharing.10.

Really enjoyed reading your devotional poem.

Poetic touch of an immortal love

I will dance and dance with you even in the nether world.- WOW, touched deeply by your verse. well done, Tony.

Beautiful and hopeful words. Worthwhile words and thoughts. I enjoyed your poetry.

Beautifully expressed. Amusing one. God bless you

For as long as I can feel the density of these words, even without a Veena, I don't see how God should not feel way much more with it, for God chose to begin to feel only where we end - and that, my poetic brother, is a greater than life feeling. You don't know how complete I feel when I read from this kind of writing, I am totally inspired.

so sweet poem........... If you lift yourself up to me with all your heart I shall be with you in your distress for you have heard the words of my mouth.

Superb! Lovely expression....I shall sing your praises playing on my veena....An amazing piece of poetry! !

This was a lovely moving poem. Brava

The poem bears the intense passion and love for the beloved, the classical touch, like veena, shrine, holy presence indicates the intricacies.

tony, your poem reminds me of a line from the psalms- call to me in your time of trouble- which is a comforting one to me. i have heard people disdain what have been called foxhole prayers, prayers called out to God in times of desperation. but i believe that these are often, if not always, our most honest prayers, the ones cried out in our vulnerability when all our defenses are down. and God encourages these. no matter what has happened or what we have been before, God will hear. the mercy of God is amazing, yes? which reminds me of another line from the psalms as rendered in the king james version- thy lovingkindness is better than life. be well! glen

O unseen God! worshiping you in my secret temple I offer you the incense of love before your golden shrine. REALLY AMAZING.... THANKS FOR SHARING

A very intense love poem. The use of descriptions makes your poem pop. When reading it, I visualize the dramatic dance movements of the deceased love. This poem falls within the fantasy genre. Excellent read.

O unseen God! worshiping you in my secret temple I offer you the incense of love before your golden shrine................beautiful lines

too good... until the dawn breaks, into mild golden rays 10+

YOU Bless me with your work all i can say is i'm inspired and revived let that pen bleed a lot of poetry.

I shall clothe you with my robe of mercy And gird you with my joy....beautiful excellent write..

Thank you for sharing, Tony....... God bless you.