Friday, November 17, 2006

If You Let Me Drive Comments

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What do I do,
When all I have is You?
All my needs with You are met,
Expecting nothing due. It's true...
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Will Barber 30 November 2006

A complex poem. You have a way of blending the divine with the profane. Your spirit shines through with this. Admirable passion, well expressed. - Will

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Patricia Gale 17 November 2006

Splendid piece L with deep meaning

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

Connecticut
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