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The writer expresses himself fluently while writing this love poem. An enjoyable one.

This speaks to me as a poem of young all-encompassing love. I like the imagery and the flow and movement. Nice work!

Life and love! With the ways of mankind. Nice work.

Very expressive and meaningful.

Thanks Fellow Poets... I really appreciate your comments.

Thanks Enofe.... I prefer this to be short.

Speaks of love. More stanzas will portray more explanations, so i take it you are still working on it.

Full of feeling is the this lovely poem!

thank you heather, i really appreciate you, please read my other poems and leave your comment.

well written filled with feeling good imagery I will go with the wind in search of you

thank you gajanan; i really appreciate,read my other poems too.

beautiful writing, thanks, I like it.