Wednesday, January 15, 2014

If You Have Never Lost A Moment... Comments

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If you have never lost a moment
of time, pausing by an old
brick wall to see tiny stars
shooting from velvet cushions of moss,
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Susy Evelyne
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Stephen Katona 18 June 2014

Learning to live in the moment is an important technique to help people become happier. Your poem delivers a practical example that will help people slow down and enjoy beauty around them.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 05 February 2014

in this loss lies the most fruitful gain, wonderful write!

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John Brown 21 January 2014

I have lost many such moments Susy, and been rewarded handsomely for it too. A lovely poem, I wish you'd made it longer.

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Susy Evelyne

Susy Evelyne

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