If you have never lost a moment
of time, pausing by an old
brick wall to see tiny stars
shooting from velvet cushions of moss,
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in this loss lies the most fruitful gain, wonderful write!
I have lost many such moments Susy, and been rewarded handsomely for it too. A lovely poem, I wish you'd made it longer.
Learning to live in the moment is an important technique to help people become happier. Your poem delivers a practical example that will help people slow down and enjoy beauty around them.