Sunday, September 10, 2006

If You Go Away Comments

Rating: 5.0

If you go away
take my sense of smell
or take the scent of the first rains after summer
that I may never remember
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Tapas Bandyopadhyaya
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Nimal Dunuhinga 14 September 2006

Excellent! a valuable gift for a wayfarer!

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Preeti - is here! 10 September 2006

Brilliant, you've set the words of passion free on paper. you might want to read my poem 'Deaf, blind and dumb'..it also talks about sight of the lover, voice of the lover and the like. btw Welcome to PH! Preets

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Tailor Bell 10 September 2006

really great style with heartfelt message. fine read. -Tailor B.

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Anirbit Mukherjee 10 September 2006

Reflects deeply passionate emotions. Must have arose out of personal experiences.

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