Sunday, March 16, 2014

If You Go Comments

Rating: 5.0

If you go,
My whole life will shrivel up, I'll start to cry,
I'll become the cold Wind, shrinking to a sigh,
I will fold up like a handkerchief's goodbye
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Sandra Feldman
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Valerie Dohren 16 March 2014

No-ones going anywhere Sandra, we shall stay to read your many inspired lines. This comes across as a passionate and heartfelt plea. Very well penned.

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Khairul Ahsan 16 March 2014

A poem of intense emotion, a pleasure to read and feel. Moved by the poignancy, the emotional intensity. 10/10 for sure!

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