If you find a woman sexy
That is because she is brainy
She can charm you with her wit
Your intelligence she can meet
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Every man needs a woman A woman who’s one of a kind Who will make him look king With a woman his lovely queen. liked this conclusion of the poem. your own confidence to allure a man is great. after all we all live for a woman and for a man. is it not. well written
Every woman needs a man a man that is trying a man whom would hold a woman such as this in his open hands.. iip
If I find a woman sexy she has eyes unlike no other if I find her so her neck and ears I treat like chocolate and now that's she's found out her lips caressed until they open.. iip
wow, you gave my poem a double comment...I'm happy.. Thank you for appreciating it.. I know there are a lot more from women aside from looks that sometimes people overlook. Mabuhay.. TY.
A lovely poem indeed, the qualities enumerated are really commendable. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
a good write about the woman. so many charming things to write about.
I find a woman sexy if she speaks well, looks well, conducts herself well and, of course, maintains herself well. Danny Draper and Bri Edwards politely mentioned some flaws, you would do well to take care of those.
Some strong elements in this poem. Watch the use of plurals. But great truths here.
With her every acts and moves...........naida, make this With her every ACT and MOVE and: Every man needs a woman A woman who’s one of a kind Who will make him look king.....[how about using] WHO WILL MAKE HIM LOOK LIKE A KING or WHO WILL MAKE HIM APPEAR THE KING With her woman his lovely queen... AND THE WOMAN HIS LOVELY QUEEN something like that? i, a man, of course, disagree with what makes a man find a woman sexy. IT AIN'T HER BRAIN, but it does involve parts of her body. of course, if she can deliver the rest of what you refer to, all the better! You agree your smiles are proofs....i KNOW you don't use punctuation, but this line begs for some punctuation, be it a comma, a semicolon, or a period after agree. but, ok naida, it is YOUR poem! i love: To manage looking pretty Aside from her being witty.....though you COULD drop the her. :) bri
All about you said in this poem, absolutely I agree! Very nice and wonderful... It's not always the physical looks, of course. your poem pointed it out the reality that must be exposed to all men.
Every woman needs a man, A man who’s her ever fan, Who will make her look queen, Perfect as she's never been. :)
Very nice. A vivisection of an ideal woman. I can just say--WOW!
What a lovely poem. It reminds my younger years... you painted a beautiful picture on the readers' mind.
Very true, but of course, you already know this! Nice write! -Kelly.
...if you find her voice magical - That´s her words so lyrical... no need to say more; =)
lovely poem done with wit and a bit of humour sprinkled with ample truism....its charming and fun to read.... you write well indeed.... blessings :)
A well crafted lovely poem, dear ate Naida...10++++