Saturday, September 26, 2009

If You Ever Remember Comments

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If you ever remember
That I was the first
To love you with great passion...
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Romeo Della Valle
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Besa Dede 26 March 2012

Such a lovely, heart-aching poem. I like the way you have constructed the plot, and how the poem flows smoothly in a format of a free verse poetry. If you have read mine 'Coz' I've got the blues for you'. I believe we narrate the same story :)) ~Besa

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