If You Ever Loved Me, Comments

A powerfully worded poem of lost love, Deeply moving to read of your anguish leading to you to deep anger. A memorable poem. You are welcome to visit mine

great write, nice use of your chanelled emotions

Love the one who has been longing for you. But why should you hate the one who is not pulled towards you? The line, 'stab me...dagger' recalls me the lines of Shakespeare's tragedies. Cheers! There is a violent sea of emotions!

great piece, eloquently written

dagger on a wound! tearing ideas Vipins ! good one

NICE POEM TRUE EXP; OF BROKEN HEART

Very good poem! Thanks for sharing!

your heart's pain is well expressed, , good poem, ,10******* Rose

Wonderful... A pain expressed... Pain of a heart which truly loved and truly crushed!

Wonderful expressions... and how true for a heart which truly loved... and truly crushed.

Love is a dagger... And you wrote it so well, dear Vipins, though heartache is plain for all eyes to read. May you smile and be happy again... Stay well and remember all wounds heal with time.

if it was love she'll come back if it wasnt meant to be let her go their are many other people out there who like us as we are and not for who we are pretending to be anyways nice poems

real love..you can not continue loving...who is avoiding your eyes...though the girl..is very beautiful...but you once loved her..is there any influence of neruda? .am i right? ..it equates the poem of neruda...a nice poem..gr8888...keeep writing..

a real passionate poem i love the style

A powerful write Vipins, you demonstrate a great range of emotion in your work.

Plenty of emotion1 i could really get into it and see where you were coming from, though it wasn't exactly a happy topic, it was still very good, captivating. definitely a 10 and great modern style!

Is it a forbidden love, Vipins? I felt the regrets of an unreachable love. The pureness of desire is clearly transcribed. I love it! Keep on penning.

the passionate pain of love and loss! very well done!

A great poem my friend, love can take us Anywhere. A great write.

(ADYATHE COMMENT ENTE VAKA THANNIRIKATE) pain in your mind expressed so well