Monday, April 10, 2023

If You Don't Like Me Comments

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All my life I have been
On the out looking in
Never had a bright side
Afraid to show my dark side
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JayJay Maybank
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Bharati Nayak 08 February 2024

You have definitely found your rhythm.Nice poem that expresses your strength in adversity.

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Rob Lamberton 08 February 2024

Love is inclusive. If it doesn't include you it was never love!

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Edgar Eslit 12 April 2023

This is great! Contrast, Jayjay!

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Pallavi Tripathi 11 April 2023

Excellent write!

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 11 April 2023

Powerful words. And a strong resolve. All things good naturally come to and. So what is something bad about?

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JayJay Maybank 12 April 2023

*The pain that you have when you're cheated on.*

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 April 2023

So cut me with your words You won't see me bleeding Strangle t me with rope You won't stop me from breathing....this poignant expression reflects a strong determination of the poet to withstand all odds and adversities!

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Poignant, melancholic. But the Notes of the poet make me tremble….

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