Sunday, December 13, 2015

If You Don't Count Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

How can you forget that moon lit night,
Earth was milky and stars were bright,
Winds were pleasant and weather inviting,
Inverted blue ocean was further exciting,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 December 2015

Moon lit night should not be forgotten. Pleasant wind gives new thrill with such marvelous imagery in this ideological poem. Very finely drafted this poem is definitely beautiful..10

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Valsa George 14 December 2015

Beautiful description of a moon lit night when tender feelings of passion overwhelm the heart! You have created a wonderful romantic setting! A lovely poem.... A 10

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M Asim Nehal 14 December 2015

Passionate poem written with heart, heartfelt poem....10+++

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Nosheen Irfan 14 December 2015

This poem has a great romantic feel that touches the depths of heart.

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Loke Kok Yee 14 December 2015

a lovely poem that will melt the hardest heart thanks Akhtat-10

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Kelly Kurt 14 December 2015

I don't have a romantic bone in my body, but you make up for that and more

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Tony Kavuoti 13 December 2015

very very Passion and and tender deeply felt from the heart. Thank you

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Tony Kavuoti 13 December 2015

Passion and and tender deeply felt from the heart. Thank you

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