Thursday, October 16, 2008

If You Do Cry... Comments

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What you have brought I found amiss,
wrapped inside your deadly kiss.
Eyes of lies your heart has told,
not even once you lips have spoke.
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Saint Cynosure
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*Trusting You* 04 November 2008

this is Amazing! ! ! I love it! very good job. wrapped inside your deadly kiss. Love that line one day... one day... Becca

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Thad Wilk 16 October 2008

Captured eloquently th' bitterness and pain of a scorned lover! *10*! ! Best wishes! Friend Thad

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Heart Felt 16 October 2008

This speaks to me, expresses the bitter sadness of the scorned so well. Thank you.

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