What you have brought I found amiss,
wrapped inside your deadly kiss.
Eyes of lies your heart has told,
not even once you lips have spoke.
I claim no gift with thoughts of right,
but true I do feel wronged.
And as a fool when he's not missed,
I continue to hold on.
There surely is a better way,
for me to find an end.
But deep inside my heart of hearts,
I know we cant stay friends.
Hatred is not what I feel,
betrayal is the closer mother.
I pray that GOD someday will send,
to you the hurtful other.
It will not change the scorn inside,
my head or heart of lies.
But a modicum of solace comes,
its true if you do cry.
Captured eloquently th' bitterness and pain of a scorned lover! *10*! ! Best wishes! Friend Thad
This speaks to me, expresses the bitter sadness of the scorned so well. Thank you.
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this is Amazing! ! ! I love it! very good job. wrapped inside your deadly kiss. Love that line one day... one day... Becca